I like your story, but this chapter confused me. And how does Jason fit into all of this? I can't wait for the next update!

i love this stroy. plese update more often!1

such a fun story! i wish i had a brother like that! but no, mine has to be an asshole . . . ah well. great story, keep it up!

that was so good! please update this soon its really good! Laters

Great story so far! I have only seen one spelling error the entire time! Thats awesome! Keep it up, and I'll keep reading! *gives Author Cookie*

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WOW! You can write, girl! You have great sentence variation, transistioners, and grammar. Writers who can combine all that with a decent plot are rare. This story looks like it's actually going somewhere, so please don't stop writing it! I'm really enjoying it. I don't like Eddie a whole lot right now, but I'm thinking that I could get to like him through some careful story-writing, depending on where you decide to take this. I love the POV changes. That makes it more interesting. The whole "teacher screams at student" deal is a little far-fetched, because teachers normally don't get that angry, but I can see how it would work (after all, this is fiction). Poor Isabella. I know how it feels to be fasely accused of something. Great job though. Please continue!

I haven't read the whole story yet, and I'm planning to in a few minutes. Before I do, I wanted to congratulate you on this chapter. I loved the first paragraph-like, LOVED it. It really hit something in me, especially the last line. The whole chapter was really well-written. Great job! I'll review again later.

hey i am now reviewing aswell wohoo anyway i am confused and curious as to where this story is going... thats a good thing, im now sorta envolved cos im so curious to find out what happens, like wether love with spark between eddie and isabella or wether it'll be just Eddie or whether she'll like Justin and of...the posibilities are endles,s am loving the story kepp it up, much love jules x

fabulous job... i'm very interested in this story. isabella seems great, quite a bit like a character in a story on my other account called Love Through Sartre. But yours is more interesting, her past is more troubled. i can't wait to see how this story goes on. her brother is great, i like him a lot. and i like eddie, he seems like the kind of guy that you could hang out with. though i like jason you haven't develped his character enough to know exactly what he's like as a person. as for the a/n in the last chapter: i think that eddie has either light brown curly hair and bright green eyes or black hair and brown eyes. two extremes, but that's just how i visualize him. anyways, i hope that this review was long enough to make up for my short reviews! great job and please update soon...!

lol... sparks, huh? i know that these reviews are short but i'll leave a long and cumulative one at the end.

great start! i'll continue reading and reviewing...

new reader. this fic is interesting! update soon!

Aw, I like this story. Bella's brother sounds so much better than mine. Mine would let me starve to death if I didn't know how to take care of myself. Hehe, but I guess I can kinda relate to her, my bro being so overprotective like Kit. Very good, keep the chapters coming!

I love this story so far. It's so cute. I hope Alexa and her weird friends don't do anything mean to Isabella. Actually, I was kinda disappointed that it was only four chapters. I hope you update soon.
~*Lee*~