Reviews for Through Engravements of Truth |
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Scarlett Letter17 chapter 12 . 2/25/2004 I like this chapter, even though it was kind of short. Short and sweet, as I like to call it. I can't wait for your next update! |
shams chapter 12 . 2/25/2004 i love your story, but i wish the chapters were a bit longer...please? keep writing tho! |
StarsignLeo chapter 12 . 2/25/2004 You're not a subtle person. you can be, yes, but as a person, a whole, NO! lol. I like it, thank you for the breather,too much drama for so long can really be too much. Write more soon, love ya. ~Mel |
kristina toffland chapter 12 . 2/25/2004 your writing is improving! you are doign an excellent job so keep up the good work and i'll keep reading! Kris |
Haute Couture chapter 12 . 2/24/2004 Sorry for the delay. I've been pretty loaded with work and the Spanish thing, but it's okay. Just catching up on my reading. . I don't really remember editing this. Either I was asleep or I didn't- they both explain...hm anyways. . I don't know about Sarah, she just seems too depressive to me. I don't think I really like the way you tend to drag out things longer than necessary. Maybe it needs it, but surely not all the time. Try longer chapters, maybe, but I know how your schedule can be. :) . Don't take any offense! Just trying to help, you know, right? |
Estelle Stafford chapter 11 . 2/22/2004 Love it, really I wondered what is going to happen next? |
Glacial Rose chapter 11 . 2/19/2004 Hey! I lurve this story and the story before it! Sorry I haven't been reviewing as much as I want to... Just school tends to prevent me in one way or another... Well, keep writing and um... That's why you're on my favorite author's list... Jenners |
kristina toffland chapter 11 . 2/18/2004 you are just da bomb! (is that still in? lol) keep up the good writing anyway! KRis |
Endowment's Seraph chapter 11 . 2/18/2004 o0, this is good. you must write more boy! ~Mel |
Coral Chimera chapter 11 . 2/18/2004 Hey, this chap is full of angst. Really can sense a personal touch to it...story getting better...can't say much for now. Well done, and you owe me an email! Ta, The Spindle~ |
Scarlett Letter17 chapter 11 . 2/18/2004 I like it. I like it a lot! Keep updating! |
kristina toffland chapter 11 . 2/17/2004 your fics always never cease to amaze me! i know, i should have reviewed earlier but i'm a nut and i didn't. keep up the good work though, all right Kris |
Haute Couture chapter 11 . 2/17/2004 Nice! Did I edit this one? I must have been half asleep...send it to me again, okay? . The thing that doesn't sound fitted is the fact that earlier on in the story, Sarah didn't seem to care at all for Adam except as a friend. Now, all of the sudden, she acts like she has a broken heart. I'm not sure if you're trying to get the point across that she just wants what she can't have, or what. . Update soon. |
kat6528 chapter 11 . 2/17/2004 That was a great chapter! Can't wait for the next |
kat6528 chapter 10 . 2/14/2004 C-Class Bimbo? where'd u get that from. Anyway good chap. Can't wait for the next one! |