Reviews for Through Engravements of Truth
Scarlett Letter17 chapter 12 . 2/25/2004
I like this chapter, even though it was kind of short. Short and sweet, as I like to call it. I can't wait for your next update!
shams chapter 12 . 2/25/2004
i love your story, but i wish the chapters were a bit longer...please?
keep writing tho!
StarsignLeo chapter 12 . 2/25/2004
You're not a subtle person. you can be, yes, but as a person, a whole, NO! lol. I like it, thank you for the breather,too much drama for so long can really be too much. Write more soon, love ya.
kristina toffland chapter 12 . 2/25/2004
your writing is improving! you are doign an excellent job so keep up the good work and i'll keep reading!
Haute Couture chapter 12 . 2/24/2004
Sorry for the delay. I've been pretty loaded with work and the Spanish thing, but it's okay. Just catching up on my reading.
I don't really remember editing this. Either I was asleep or I didn't- they both anyways.
I don't know about Sarah, she just seems too depressive to me. I don't think I really like the way you tend to drag out things longer than necessary. Maybe it needs it, but surely not all the time. Try longer chapters, maybe, but I know how your schedule can be. :)
Don't take any offense! Just trying to help, you know, right?
Estelle Stafford chapter 11 . 2/22/2004
Love it, really I wondered what is going to happen next?
Glacial Rose chapter 11 . 2/19/2004
Hey! I lurve this story and the story before it! Sorry I haven't been reviewing as much as I want to... Just school tends to prevent me in one way or another... Well, keep writing and um... That's why you're on my favorite author's list...
kristina toffland chapter 11 . 2/18/2004
you are just da bomb! (is that still in? lol) keep up the good writing anyway!
Endowment's Seraph chapter 11 . 2/18/2004
o0, this is good. you must write more boy!
Coral Chimera chapter 11 . 2/18/2004
Hey, this chap is full of angst. Really can sense a personal touch to it...story getting better...can't say much for now. Well done, and you owe me an email!
The Spindle~
Scarlett Letter17 chapter 11 . 2/18/2004
I like it. I like it a lot! Keep updating!
kristina toffland chapter 11 . 2/17/2004
your fics always never cease to amaze me! i know, i should have reviewed earlier but i'm a nut and i didn't. keep up the good work though, all right
Haute Couture chapter 11 . 2/17/2004
Nice! Did I edit this one? I must have been half asleep...send it to me again, okay?
The thing that doesn't sound fitted is the fact that earlier on in the story, Sarah didn't seem to care at all for Adam except as a friend. Now, all of the sudden, she acts like she has a broken heart. I'm not sure if you're trying to get the point across that she just wants what she can't have, or what.
Update soon.
kat6528 chapter 11 . 2/17/2004
That was a great chapter! Can't wait for the next
kat6528 chapter 10 . 2/14/2004
C-Class Bimbo? where'd u get that from. Anyway good chap. Can't wait for the next one!
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