Constructive critisism time!
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1. Nothing really astonishing happens in your chapters. Sure, stuff happens, but it seems like you're dragging it out too much. The chapters are a bit on the short side, and although I know you have the whole AP physics before regular physics thing going, you know...right?
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That's all. Anyways, I LOVE how you diss guys, by the way.
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Bye! Nice chapter.

here returning the favor of a review! u asked, and so i just gotta say that i love it!

actually i dunno why i like chad so much. maybe it's cause he causes all the drama which makes it so much more interesting. anyways, well written chapter, yet i'm left with a feeling of confusion.

Update soon. Terrific chapter!

I'm SO sorry that I didn't review this chapter I didn't even know you updated 'til now! As always this was a great chapter and I just have to say that I love Chad lol. You have him such a great personality...now if only he were real hehe. Great chapter, update again soon!
~ Amy ~

I can't add you to my favorites, then you'd totally win! and I can't let that happen. This is really good, much more complex then the first and SO much better, personally. Sorry I signed off last night my computer started going crazy! I swear it was possesed! The CD drives kept opening and things kept poping up! I was getting scared, it was like it was out to get me! I swear it! Finals this week, bleh. Write more soon, love ya hun!
~Mel

Hey I never said you WERE smart, but neither did I say you weren't so...Seriously you aren't idiotic, if you were, I wouldn't be reading this great fictional work :) right now...I'm trying to get sleep and to be in class when I should, but it isn't quite working- just too many extra-curricular stuff to attend to, besides all the work that is starting to pile up! AArgh, would LOVE to have a good dose of caffeine but it HELPS me SLEEP! Stupid, eh? Well I love Starbucks and Coffee Bean anyhow...just tried the Rhumba Frappucino and it ROCKS! Heh, won't go on about my indulgences..This chapter is GOOD. No time to check out your revised TTWOG...nursing an upset tummy from a few days back- mild food poisoning I think. Plus all my crazy agendas...ugh! Oh well, will email soon, and just don't forget I still love your work! I just love-hate Chad..annoying yet SO desirable..now get them together! I think that'd be SWEET...Write more soon!
Later days,
The Lethal Spindle

Like I told you before, nice chapter, although you're missing something.
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Update soon. x3

hey nice chapter you got there. i absolutely love chad

hey nice chapter you got there. i absolutely love chad

Well done, buddy! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I had too much work to do for school. Anyways, I hope you update soon.
~*~*Sweet-Child03~*~*

This story is coming out so well. Anyways, in the last paragraph of this chapter, when you wrote...I noticed this table that had a picture of him when he was older. Shouldn't it be younger? Maybe it's just me and I'm very confused. Well, good chapter. Keep writing!

o0... he's back! I knew it would be him otherwise it just wouldn't be as god if it was someone else. This really is turning out to be so much better, things are clearer and your writing has improved for the best. write more soon! love ya babe!
~Mellie

Finaly, things start to get intresting! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hey! Yep, memory lapseextotic writing...I'm going a lil nutty lately, I'm not sure if the words that come outta my mouth coordinate with my brain :p School's really taking it's toll on me. I'm so not used to waking up at 6pm and to top that, I haven't had a chance for afternoon naps like previously. Nopes, not mad at your stupidity. For now that is. Will tell you when I am...Gold? Pot of gold? Hrm, I really don't get you! If you're idiotic, where do I stand THEN? LoL...Heh, gotta hit the showers- have fun and take school a lil easier yes?
Sher~The Lethal Spindle