Reviews for Through Engravements of Truth
tnguyen143 chapter 31 . 8/28/2004
is it chad's?...let it be chad!...but im the ending when she said all the stuff about confronting the father {"I didn?t even know how to confront the father. I didn?t even know if this person could be a father.")...makes it seem lyk she knows who the father is...and it sounds like it is...chad's by what she said...
estelle stafford chapter 30 . 8/25/2004
Loved it as usually, oh boy sarah put herself in a diaster.
SKumouse chapter 30 . 8/24/2004
O! Great chapter! I loved it! I think I like Jordan better than Chad, but I always switch back and forth! ANyway, hoe you update soon! I can't wait to see what happens!
Stevshals chapter 30 . 8/24/2004
Hopefully she is not going to end up with Chad. Jordan? yeah. You should definately post the next chapter now. I mean it would be committing a sin if you don't!
CrystalDusk chapter 30 . 8/24/2004
no offense but...round and round the mulberry bush! this story's moving in circles!
Coral Chimera chapter 30 . 8/24/2004
You..meanie! You sent her to bed with Jordan again..she's trapped in her own lair. Her web of deceit, lies, betrayal and heinousness. Sarah's characteristics are so crystal clear- that two-timing, guiltless, consciousless, And if she ends up with Jordan..I've been so faithful since're gonna break my heart if this resolves the way we all don't want it to.
Emotions aside, I'll say've impressed me. I've become in some way attached to your work, and I've never stopped being impressed with your writing style. So I guess..whatever the outcome, I should try and digest. Haha. better be nice and upload that next chapter soon. The final one. *Tear*
Baby Milo chapter 29 . 8/20/2004
I hope Chad and Sarah stay together! That would be the best ending! They NEED to be together! If they don't get together will there be another sequel or is this it? Is Scott gone? Or will he come back? I like him, and I feel bad for him, but I don't want him to get Sarah! I like Chad, he's awesome! Update soon!
Coral Chimera chapter 29 . 8/20/2004
Dude this was super cool. Liked the whole confrontation, face to face, blunt as a used pencil. Whoa he gunned her down so well. Great job and I'm really impressed by your writing skill improvement. Update soon!
CrystalDusk chapter 29 . 8/20/2004
round and round the mulberry bush! this is what this story reminds me of! round and round we go where we end up nobody knows! so please stop this round round thing! D
Baby Milo chapter 28 . 8/18/2004
OO! I can't wait to see what happens! I"m excited! Poor Scott, though! Hope you update soon!
Coral Chimera chapter 28 . 8/17/2004
Ahh..was just curious why my review didn't appear..then I realised. Read this was FP was yeah. My 2 cents: I liked the spontaneity of the ending..and how the whole ordeal took place. Great emotions and description. The cynical argument..ladida. But yeah thought I'd point out there's this typing error..or is this Ch 29?
Loved it, can't wait for a new fic! *winks*
annchick1273 chapter 28 . 8/14/2004
wo Good writing on this chapter. Very good i guess. I like how you go on and explain how she feels, esp. the part with "I want to yell at him... blah blah blah" and you do that a bunch of times. heh Smart. blah So I thought you didn't like sap/happy endings? I guess i should prepare myself... lemme guess. uhh The whore is gonna take back Chad... even if she technicalyl never had him. I hate that whore and then Sarah is gonna get run over by a car... RIGHT? anywho Sarah rocks the socks i... don't wear. I like her now! wahoo! haha okay later
annchick1273 chapter 27 . 8/14/2004
heh Scott is so awesome... You're weird you know? You make all the characters that are suppose to be hated likeable. blah WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? ;) hah so Sarah finally realizes a bunch of crap. wahoo. She was really starting to get on my nerves. Anywho, the writing for this chapter was better than last. Maybe it's cause you describe emotion and what no in this and the last one was just convo (I think?). So this chapter made Sarah less a bitch. I don't hate her anymore! :)
Sen chapter 27 . 8/14/2004
Despite her actions, I think Sarah is the most humane of them all.
CrystalDusk chapter 27 . 8/13/2004
humm so is she gonna end up with chad or what? update quick!
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