Reviews for Through Engravements of Truth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() is it chad's?...let it be chad!...but im confused...in the ending when she said all the stuff about confronting the father {"I didn?t even know how to confront the father. I didn?t even know if this person could be a father.")...makes it seem lyk she knows who the father is...and it sounds like it is...chad's by what she said... |
![]() ![]() Loved it as usually, oh boy sarah put herself in a diaster. |
![]() ![]() O! Great chapter! I loved it! I think I like Jordan better than Chad, but I always switch back and forth! ANyway, hoe you update soon! I can't wait to see what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully she is not going to end up with Chad. Jordan? yeah. You should definately post the next chapter now. I mean it would be committing a sin if you don't! |
![]() ![]() ![]() no offense but...round and round the mulberry bush! this story's moving in circles! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You..meanie! You sent her to bed with Jordan again..she's trapped in her own lair. Her web of deceit, lies, betrayal and heinousness. Sarah's characteristics are so crystal clear- that two-timing, guiltless, consciousless, slutty..gr. And if she ends up with Jordan..I've been so faithful since TTWOG..you're gonna break my heart if this resolves the way we all don't want it to. Emotions aside, I'll say that..you've impressed me. I've become in some way attached to your work, and I've never stopped being impressed with your writing style. So I guess..whatever the outcome, I should try and digest. Haha. M..you better be nice and upload that next chapter soon. The final one. *Tear* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Chad and Sarah stay together! That would be the best ending! They NEED to be together! If they don't get together will there be another sequel or is this it? Is Scott gone? Or will he come back? I like him, and I feel bad for him, but I don't want him to get Sarah! I like Chad, he's awesome! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude this was super cool. Liked the whole confrontation, face to face, blunt as a used pencil. Whoa he gunned her down so well. Great job and I'm really impressed by your writing skill improvement. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() round and round the mulberry bush! this is what this story reminds me of! round and round we go where we end up nobody knows! so please stop this round round thing! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() OO! I can't wait to see what happens! I"m excited! Poor Scott, though! Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh..was just curious why my review didn't appear..then I realised. Read this was FP was pathetically..down..so yeah. My 2 cents: I liked the spontaneity of the ending..and how the whole ordeal took place. Great emotions and description. The cynical argument..ladida. But yeah thought I'd point out there's this typing error..or is this Ch 29? Loved it, can't wait for a new fic! *winks* |
![]() ![]() ![]() wo Good writing on this chapter. Very good i guess. I like how you go on and explain how she feels, esp. the part with "I want to yell at him... blah blah blah" and you do that a bunch of times. heh Smart. blah So I thought you didn't like sap/happy endings? I guess i should prepare myself... lemme guess. uhh The whore is gonna take back Chad... even if she technicalyl never had him. I hate that whore and then Sarah is gonna get run over by a car... RIGHT? anywho Sarah rocks the socks i... don't wear. I like her now! wahoo! haha okay later -Ann |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh Scott is so awesome... You're weird you know? You make all the characters that are suppose to be hated likeable. blah WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? ;) hah so Sarah finally realizes a bunch of crap. wahoo. She was really starting to get on my nerves. Anywho, the writing for this chapter was better than last. Maybe it's cause you describe emotion and what no in this and the last one was just convo (I think?). So this chapter made Sarah less a bitch. I don't hate her anymore! :) |
![]() ![]() Despite her actions, I think Sarah is the most humane of them all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() humm so is she gonna end up with chad or what? update quick! |