Damn. Just when I was getting the hook of your cryptic-ness, a darn cliffhanger? Not gonna say much except: nice suspense. Update soon right?

I loved this chapter, hehe especially the part where she met the guy and his hair was so flat that it tempted her to poke his head lol. Clasic! OOh I wonder who it could be? Update soon cause I'm dying to know who this mystery person is!
~ Amy ~

No I want to know who the person is! Can't wait for the next chapter.

My attempt at a "good review" now, since you thought my last one was bad.

Ugh. Okay, I had to re-read the last chapter or so, just to understand what was going on. Guys in suits are hot. I don't know what you're talking about.
Lol. Subliminal flirting. Nice.
Maybe you should have like a high school reunion. It would be very ...amusing. I'd like to read about that.
"He suddenly pressed his body against mine and brushed cheeks..." How random. But then again, I always thought Chad was a random guy. Kind of like you.
"It looked like they all had these fake attitudes on as if they enjoyed the classiness of rich society." Why wouldn't they enjoy the classiness of rich society, hmm?
"...as if it was sprayed on, which slightly tempted me to poke his head (run-on. ugh.)" Nice. So like Sarah, I like it.
"A voice suddenly said behind me. I turned to see who it was." Adam? Adam? Adam?

"I am such a bad updater. I'm almost like Wendy now. I cannot be like Wendy. Actually, I think she updated more than I had this month. Dammit!" You will never be like me. Never, Muahaha.

wow this chapter is short. don't tell me you're gonna get as bad as me when it comes to the length of chapters!

Finally i'm on the internet! You're a good writer, stop doubting yourself. I like the chapter. God! Hello she must realize that she likes Chad. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Sorry I didn't review sooner, I've been REALLY busy lately. I like how the story is going though and am looking forward to the next chapter :)
~ Amy ~

Hey! Haven't heard from you in a while. This chapter? Well you know what I feel? Your story's slowing down...update more often! Though I understand that you're really busy with stuff and all. My life has been an emotional rollercoaster this past week. In the midst of 1st term tests, so it's been crazy, lack-of-sleep syndrome. 4 days down, 3 more to go. Bleh~ Abt the "friend" of mine...well there was a big fight and things are "over" but I'm in a much calmer state of mind...Think there are spelling errors in this chap. Making a move for now. And really, you should update more often. Have a great weekend (TGIF) and did I mention you should update more often? Add in the e-mails! LoL..
Later days,
Sher Reen

it's them, it's all them. lol.. this was great, sorry it took me so long. Yeah, your subtle messages, um, aren't. lol. If you don't mind me saying, you seem so much more cheerful lately. what's new? write more soon!
~Mel

bahahaha "When Chad opened the door, I was bedazzled. He looked absolutely stunning." YAY. finally. something the chad lovers can grasp onto. yea, i like chad. as annoying, big headed he is, i like him. XD.

awesome. sarah & chad i mean. the chapter is great too. maybe sarah will finally realize that she NEEDS chad... maybe even possible a L word?

i like your writing, it is so personable, and you've done that in a way that many can't accomplish becuaes it isn't just about writing in first person but getting really into character, keep up the good work!
Kris

Hey! My internet is working pretty good right now. I think your writing has improved. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hey, guess you're seriously busy lately. Won't bother goin on aim express everytime I'm online then. This chap was more of a distraction I'd say. There wasn't much of plot development here. Anyhows, later days~~
Sher*

Great chapter, I liked it a lot. It's good that she conquered her fear, I'm proud of her lol. Sorry I don't have time to write a good review, but this story really is awesome, you're a great writer!
~ Amy ~