Reviews for Salt and Pepper Shaker
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
lol! what a funny poem...very, i dont know, cute. i liked. the backwards up i found very intriguing *hehe* great work sweetie, kudos.
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
Cool format. New styles of poetry are always interesting. It really helps convey the feeling of amusement park rides. Keep writing :)
Aleonic Relic chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
interesting poem, i liked it. good job.
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Lol, this is funny! Odd ya, but kinda cute in it;s way, good job, lol. Love, Mia
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
Interesting format...very reminiscent of an amusement park ride, indeed.
Deadwind chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
Oh my! I don't know why but this seems so cute! Good job, and next time take me to the amusement park with you!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
Excellent work and an fresh form.
~Heart of the Sword
SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
This is strange.
Although I certainly get the imagery behind the whole thing, its strange.
Maybe BECAUSE I get the imagery behind the whole thing is what makes it strange.
To me anyway!
One With Moonlight chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
It's a cute childhood memory. Aw _
Anthony Draconius chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
This is a definitely interesting poem. This reminds me of "ee cummings'" style of poetry. His poems are awesome and being a legendary poet, it is not easy to be close to his style. At the same time, this is your style and never let anyone say any different. Great job, Please keep on writing Seras Nova.
moment2moment chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
Hey sweetie! I really like this poem. Your new style is awesome! Love always,
nefaria18 chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
guess who! double meaning nice and how sentimental it is. my first review, dont laugh!