| Reviews for Weaver of Time |
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   Shalafi chapter 1 . 11/12/2004 Another wonderful poem. It's people like you that made me start writing poetry. I have to admit. You are one of the best poets who's works I've read in quite a long time. Every one of your poems has been breathtaking. There's not just one that stands out. They're all outstanding, and no amount of "Yay, good job." can do justice. I hope someday to amass the talent you have. |
| Kethry Jonas chapter 1 . 8/22/2004 whoa. nothing but that. whoa. |
| Needa S chapter 1 . 7/11/2004 Oustanding piece of work! Beautifully done! You are very talented and it shows. Thank you for your kind reviews. Needa S. |
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/23/2004 forget the favorite story, an additon to my favorite author's list! Just beautiful lines, one upon the other. I usually am struck by a stanza or two but never line upon line. Very pretty poem here too! |
| Czarina Matviyko chapter 1 . 3/5/2004 I love the way this flows, and the rhyming is great. |
| A.C. Burke chapter 1 . 2/29/2004 Wonderful, wonderful poem...I like the way it flows, and the occasional break in a more regular meter scheme that emphasizes imagery (the line "Dancing in the heart of a fire's flare" is a prime example) - very nice! |
| Aesc chapter 1 . 2/22/2004 This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. |
| Identity chapter 1 . 2/15/2004 a very well written piece. it flows smoothly adn the rhyme scheme doesn't seem forced. over all very well done. |
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 1/21/2004 This one flowed so well...truly awesome piece of work. Great rhyming, and really great imagery. These are a few lines that really had an impact on me: *Sewing new patches to destiny's quilt* *Folding her tapestries of forgotten lands* *dancing in the heart of a fire's flare* Truly awesome lines. Never stop writing! |
| Mazeura chapter 1 . 1/21/2004 This is amazing. I love your work. I cant get enough of it. I told a friend about it too and they love it as well! |
| BranwenEithne chapter 1 . 1/20/2004 Beautiful! i can picture the Weaver too...*picturing* oo ahh...i love the flow and the use of words. I also see your an Enya fan? woo! Enya ever and always! |
| Werecat99 chapter 1 . 1/17/2004 That was one stunning poem! Rhythm and meter were close to perfect and the theme was captivating. Good work. |
| glitterjewele chapter 1 . 1/13/2004 *melts* so lovely, so . . . hypnotical. your poetry never fails to entrance me, somehow; it's always so magical. and i love magical poetry in general, it's my favorite kind, but no one writes it like you do. your talent is so unique. it just stuns me. :) this poem is gorgeous. great use of structure and repetition throughout, simply amazing imagery. the two bits that are sticking with me here are: "a barely perceptible silhouette," and "sewing new patches to destiny's quilt." breathtaking piece, i love it. kudos! |
| Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 1/12/2004 This was great. The rhyming scheme didn't sound forced at all and it just kind of weaved in with the poem (No pun intended). Great job on this. ~Lidless Eye |
| Children of the Root chapter 1 . 1/11/2004 awesome poem. Its truly beautiful. |