Reviews for Spinning Yarns
abcdefgh12 chapter 28 . 3/27/2004
This has been my favorite chapter so far! When Tori and Nick reunited a huge, and I mean huge, grin spread across my face! It stinks to be Pablo, but I'm glad the lovers are together again! Update soon!
passion101 chapter 27 . 3/22/2004
wow, for not knowing the girl for very long, he sure made a strong declaration.
Vincenza chapter 27 . 3/22/2004
Wrtie more soon!
abcdefgh12 chapter 27 . 3/21/2004
Aww poor Jahson and Pablo. Lucky Nick! I hope they save him soon so the lovers can reunite!
JustDuck chapter 27 . 3/21/2004
Well at least Tori's got options if Nick DOES get his neck stretched!
I think it would be hilarious for them to either A)rescue Nick and the three of them duke it out for Tori, or B)Jahson and Pablo get caught that Tori is left to rescue all three! :)
Vincenza chapter 18 . 3/20/2004
I love the story so far. I can't finish it today, but I thought I should tell you how wonderful it is. I will continue reading it.
JustDuck chapter 26 . 3/18/2004
WHAT!
OMG, I'M gonna kill him with my bare hands!
Hurry up and get him! Leave Tori there, she'll understand. What's being left alone while you're sick as long as your love is alive!
passion101 chapter 26 . 3/18/2004
argh, stupid men and their selfishness! I hate them all!
abcdefgh12 chapter 26 . 3/17/2004
POOR TORI! I knew that banana was trouble! I'm very dissapointed with Pablo! How could he do such a thing! I'm confident that the gang will save Nick though...
JustDuck chapter 25 . 3/14/2004
AT the risk of getting stoned alive by PETA - shoudl they get desperate they could always eat the monkey...

::Duck starts laughing when she reads about Tori sleep-talking::
She better not be as bad as my husband! He holds actual conversations. He should never be a spy or the President of the United States because I'd get the secret nuclear codes like THAT ::snaps fingers::
passion101 chapter 25 . 3/14/2004
aaw, cliffhanger! Those things r SO evil!
abcdefgh12 chapter 25 . 3/14/2004
Wow you're on a role updating fast with awesome chapters. Yay!
JustDuck chapter 24 . 3/12/2004
Row, row, row your boat - gently out to sea...

Hooray for the return of Jahson! Hee, I think I'd put my money on him if he and Pablo duked it out, though.
passion101 chapter 24 . 3/12/2004
i hope that nick is alright.
abcdefgh12 chapter 24 . 3/12/2004
YAY! I'm so glad you updated! So now Tori has three men who love her. Lucky gal! My favorite line is when you said "She shrieked, shaking his soldiers" It made me laugh. Don't worry I know you meant shoulders. And later on in the story you said Tori and Pablo discussed literature and society, but I thought Tori hated books? It's silly of her to hate such wonderful things if you ask me! Good job all around though.
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