Reviews for River Bed
HarlequinDancer chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Aww, I like this. I really like the last four lines...
"And thus I lay here silently
Dreaming endless dreams
Under moon and under stars
In the meadow by the stream"
...they wrap it all up well. Good job :)
Rara Punk chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
this poem is nice, as you said in the summary it is does have good use of imagery. AND i have checked out that site, its now on my favourites list and i'll check it every so often to read the comics. :)