Reviews for The Chronicles of the Daughter of Dragons
Crelian2202 chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Much better than before. Great job. I think you made some very very very good improvements. Improvements so good I had to say very three times ;)
dragonboy3611 chapter 2 . 2/19/2004
The decriptive parts of the story were awesome. Going along with the other review, actions should be able to tell the story without dialogue. I hope you continue the story, I would like to see how it turns out!
Crelian2202 chapter 2 . 1/2/2004
Was pretty good but the dialogue took away from the story. first the point of view in the dialogue was a little confusing. Second there shouldn't be any dialogue. It really isn't that challenging to simply use descriptive gestures to get a point across without having any of the animals talk and doing that adds to the story.