Reviews for Thing
Post Apocalyptic chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Harsh, very harsh. But very good also. Bravo.
Valerie
embracethedark chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
Wow. (yes i know im inarticulate!). That was...great. I can completely relate to the feeling of being worthless. You're such a good writer, please write more!
l'orage d'absinthe chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
hmm. nice. i liked the flow, a few of your other poems seemed sort of contrived, but this one was...free?
Razor Sharp Kisses chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
When I feel worthless, this is exactly what I wish I could write! I like the short lines and how they go together. Parts of this could very well be one of those angsty songs "punk" bands write for their dads or whatever. I know the emotions and feelings conveyed through this all too well. It's written nicely.
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
The structure of the poem sounds like it is crying. Confessing its pain and missery and suffering through broken lines and rhymes.
But, it fills up its blank canvas with this sadness, or it erases a picture of sunshine with it.
Great job!
Sterces chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
Hm... Wow... I can relate to this poem... I like it... Depressing, but very very good... ) Keep it up.