Reviews for Under the First Mistletoe |
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![]() ![]() AH! You have GOT to update ASAP! |
![]() ![]() aw *sniff sniff* that was so sweet, but dont let Sally chicken out! That would SO not be cool! :) |
![]() ![]() oh no dont start a chapter count down! i may die of... something bad. aww... jordan'd BETTER confess his undying love for her and KISS HER! :) JUST KISS HER ALREADY, WOULD YOU? hehe. keep updating! |
![]() ![]() That was great, but why do you have to keep doing cliff hangers, I mean it is her wedding! Anyway, update soon, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! You so mislead me! From the title of this chapter, I thought "Ok, this is it! They're finally gonna tell each other how they feel (and maybe even kiss!)", but I was wrong! But I don't want to sound like I was disapointed 'cause I'm really not! I loved this chapter! Lilly is so cute! I'm just a flufaholic and can't wait to see some action! :o) Anyway, I love you're story and I'm really sad it's coming to and end. Can't wait for the next update! Veronique |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely lovely lovely! |
![]() ![]() OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! I want to noe wats gonna happen to Lizzie and Jordan and Lily...lol...ok im gonna shut up now! Keep up the great work! ~*Vicky*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() all I can say is that it's wonderful! Update soon please, bye |
![]() ![]() ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ah! I feel so bad for the poor girl, she's so lovelorn at the current moment. I'm so excited for the next chapter, cause this story absolutely rocks, and you update so often, that it makes me very happy. I line "I love you,' she whipsered to herself and no one" was so great! Seriously. I could picture on the balcony, all sad and happy at the same time and stuff. And it's so sad, because when you say I love you, it's usually you're special someone that hears it as well as yourself, but instead she was whispering it to no one. Well, it was to Jordan but he didn't hear it. Hehe. So yeah. Great job! Update again soon because I want a little revelation of Jordan's feelings. Great, magnificent story you have here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;( Four more chapters? And the ending to that chapter was bittersweet. It would've been better if he had heard her, but you know, I'm loving the anticipation! Post more soon! |
![]() ![]() So sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice job... i can't beleive jordan's little sister said that, it's so sweet.. definnatly a good story keep writing... can't wait to see what happans |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great stuff! I love Lilly so so much! THis is such a sweet story. Hope you write more after you wrap this one up. : D -Erin |
![]() ![]() OMG...I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS THE BEST IVE READ IN A WHILE...I WANT AN UPDATE COS I NEED MORE...URE REALLY GOOD AT THAT...! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! *~VICKY~* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah... So cute! I had a bg smile on my face during the whole chapter! He was holding her in his arms..! And they came SO close to kissing hadn't been for Lily! I hope they'll have a second chance again very soon! I know I'm maybe annoying with wanthing to see them kiss and all, but what do you expect from a fluff girl? Anyway, awesome chapter! I hope you'll update very soon! Veronique |