Reviews for Under the First Mistletoe
leavesfallingup chapter 20 . 1/2/2012
A beautifully written story. Though the suspense and anxiety was all in their minds, it was good to read about them getting together in the end. Everyone else knew already.

I had to laugh when I read the part about Jordan and the mall-meeting. Did Ethan tell Lizzie's family about the fact that Jordan had talked about his dream-girl for six months? Did they tell him that Lizzie had done the same thing? It is no wonder that everyone else thought that the match was a foregone conclusion.

I apologize for not giving you the chapter-by-chapter review your story deserves. I had to read the entire story offline. I will save it to my favorites and review the chapters I missed when I re-read it.
rose chapter 2 . 10/14/2011
very nice
Brightheart chapter 20 . 10/8/2011
i immensely loved this story.
cheesecake15 chapter 20 . 8/24/2011
OKay one word. And that id AWESOMENESS. Complete AWESOMENESS. xx .
Terra Nova chapter 11 . 7/4/2011
Cristina chapter 3 . 6/17/2011
OH MY GOOOOSH! This is so freakin good :D I love love love it! 3 3 I'm just giggling like a little girl :) lol this is so cute :)
Linnea7 chapter 20 . 4/26/2011
Sweet story! I really liked Lily. She was such an enthusiastic and fun eight year old to read about!
brownie bunny chapter 20 . 4/21/2011
I really did love this story! It kept me awake till 3 in the morning, reading it through and through...and rereading the sweeter bits.. :-D I really really liked it! Do keep on writing! Maybe, it could be your profession someday! :-D Unless, it is already? :-D
daffodils chapter 20 . 1/9/2011
I absolutely luv your story ! it's creative and very cute ! luv luv luv it !
Lifes.Little.Secrets chapter 20 . 11/30/2010
OMG! I loved this story! I totally believe in Christmas magical love once again!
applenica chapter 20 . 9/25/2009
sweet story. it's fate brought them together.
dreamgirl chapter 20 . 9/23/2009
omg i love this story!

thanx so much for writing it!

its so cute!
Dead Deactivated chapter 20 . 8/7/2009
Teehee that was beautiful i love Jordan and Lizzie. I also love Mistle toe! Faboulous story. Keep Writing
AJS chapter 20 . 7/29/2009
Cute story, some parts maybe a little too cute and unrealistic though. I don't think the title really had to relate to anything, other than the very end when they finally kissed and got together. There were some chapters that didn't really add to your plot at all though, and could probably be omitted. I also think that Lizzie's attraction towards Jordan was a little shallow. How can you say you might be in love with someone when you have barely talked to them? Well I guess that just relates to a difference in opinions on love at first sight. Anyways. I also think that the whole ice skating falling in thing was unrealistic, in that Jordan didn't act like he cared that Lizzie got hurt at all until she was all better and stuff. If he was so concerned then why didn't he visit her in her room? It's not like it would have taken a lot of effort to do so. Also, I thought she was 19 in the very beginning?

Anyways, this is a sweet story. Cute. Actually it's been on my to-read list for a while. :)

- Alyssa
Lexi chapter 20 . 7/10/2009
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