|Reviews for Danger|
| Shadow Spartan chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
I don't know what to say, except that you should read my poem called 'Depression'.
| Melissa Lea Night chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
honestly your not discribing the pain of it, emotional or physical. your discribing how it looks which is pretty original. most people when they write suicide poems they talk about all the pain, the suffering, and whatnot. yet you just simplify it and take it to a brief moment of one cut and i like that. good job.
| Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
I usually don't like poems about suicide... But i really love this one. I love the way that it is worded. Quite brilliant.