Reviews for Ticking
Justin Carlton chapter 2 . 10/6/2005
That was amazingly good! It reminded me of the Sixth Sense (Bruce Willis). Keep writing, because that was really great. (I think you should drop the author's note - not only is it really not that confusing, but you should leave the readers guessing. If they didn't get it by the end, then they don't deserve to be reading the story LOL).
Jennifer Bond-Barclay chapter 2 . 9/28/2005
This drew me in right away! I got every bit of it even without the authors note. It wasn't confusing to me at all. Of course, I'm a big fan of Twilight Zone type stories and such. I LOVED it! I WISH I could write something like this, but unfortunately my mind doesn't work like that.
Kelpy D chapter 2 . 8/15/2005
That gave me chills, and the twist reminded me of the movie The Others, it was so unexpected. I love it. Keep writing!
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 2 . 8/11/2005
Whoa heck! That was...amazing! Like, so REAL! Spooky, yo!

Loved it. It's going on my Faves list. Good job!

happy writing
Firith chapter 2 . 2/23/2005
This is a wonderful story, I love the idea and I hope you write more stories like this in the future. It really got me thinking, besides, somtimes confusings good.