Reviews for Free Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really don't know what to say, just awesome, i loved every second, your work is wonderful isabelle |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiya! I was wondering... do your characters have a life of their own, much as mine do, or are you writing some of Amy's internal ruminations from your own thoughts? Because they're fascinatingly lifelike, as if Amy really -is- talking. *thumbs up* C'est tres bien! At the point where Luke shows up on Amy's doorstep, I have to pause with the twin urges of either cheering wildly and hugging him - or socking him a good one. Sure, it's romantic for him to show up after all this time.. and yet, it's kind of arrogantly male -to- show up after all this time. (Now I know why they say women are fickle. *wink*) I think I would have been more accepting of a letter asking if Amy would like to resume their correspondence. But that's just me. A great story and you ended on the perfect note! (I don't think I could have stood if more complications came Amy's way - her mother being the most obvious, I think) Congrats on finishing it! And now, may I have more of Sam and Kate, please? ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() *beggs for more soon* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear god, that was so sad. If he doesn't come back, I'm going to hunt him down... I swear I will :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Writing , your leaving me hanging, i hate that write more!lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww! so sad! please update soon |
![]() ![]() Can't wait for more! Soon please! |
![]() ![]() i really like this story, it's very well written. keep up the good work P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not entirely sure how I feel about Luke leaving. I don't think it's the best course of action, but he must have a good reason for doing it, right? Or maybe not... I'm having a really hard time picturing a happy ending here. \ |
![]() ![]() ![]() He is a coward. A stupid, runaway coward. And i think he should stop running away, it must be annoying to sally. pish. Stupid boys. Update soon. liriel |
![]() ![]() Wow... This chapter sounds so sad! I love the part where you bring in the missing tequila and its real meaning. very interesting... but please bring luke back soon! or maybe you have other ideas in mind... ) keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no, he's left again! good chappie! the revelation about david being the father was like WOW, anyway it does make sense, LoL! please bring Luke back, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! That was deep! I cant wait to read more, i hate that Luke left, i cant wait till he comes back, great job on this ch! isabelle |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so far. Write more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to let you know I'm reading. Great chapter. Unexpected note on the ending. And no nitpicks this time. :) |