Reviews for Free Love |
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![]() ![]() beyond cute story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read straight through all chapters. It was so addicting. Thanx for such an enjoying story. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very romantic story. I really did enjoy it and the whole idea that it wasn't set during 'now' time. However, I was just wondering when exactly was this set? I know that you've probably mentioned it somewhere... but... is it during the 70's? I'm assuming so. Excellent story. Have a nice day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHE! I LOVE YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. beautiful ending. ) sweet. ) i really like the whole thing with free love, and all the allusions to them being trapped and then free. that's really awesome. ) great story. i've had a great time procrastinating, while reading this. ) props to you! ) now i'm going to read some more of your stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Oh my God," I say. 'I' as in ME.. your reader. WOW. THis is definitely unexpected. WOW ) hehe. ) i just have to read the rest. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() man. you really pick nice places to end the chapters. ) this one was sad. crying at the moment... him leaving is... somewhat expected... and david. well well well.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. all that emotion. you've written it really well! ) props to you! ) i really like the ending to this chapter, about how they're both trapped. it really goes to show something about those times. and compare to it to times now... *sigh* great writing. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok. can't wait to find out now... thankfully i have the next chapter up already !0 hehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Sally is such... ARGH! / and i bet she's just making the baby thing up again? but so sweet at the end! ) they both love each other, but they've gotten themselves into a situation where nothing is possible anymore... (( |
![]() ![]() ![]() E! )SO SWEET! ) I love love love!it's so sad though... all the stuff that he had to go through... ( |
![]() ![]() ![]() m. i like. interesting proposition there... but yeah. i reallyty like. more reading, it seems. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! that's cute. it's worrying though. touches on a few issues i guess... onward i go. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting plot. ) I know that you've had this completed for quite a while, but I found it on someone's favourites, and it soudned too good to pass up. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nicely written. creative and constructive. the flow of the story was smooth, making it an enjoyable read. although the happy-romantic-ending (yay!i didnt have to get angry at you) was typical, the twists and conflicts were good..not something i read everyday. you're a good writer..keep it up! all the best! |