This was a VERY well written story. I really liked it. I went on an emotional rollercoaster with all the characters. The only thing is I think the marriage at the end was a little overkill, but you are a very talented writer and you should continue to write.

I liked it, very much actually. Though I really had a problem with the end. It just doesn't seems quite right. Too hapy may be. But most of all I disaproved of Luke's solution, running away can't solve your problems. May be I am wrong, but I also couldn't imagine how it helped him to get over the war's scars, besides heving someone who have also been there I mean, because even that isn't quite enough. Although as I said I am just saying my opinion I can easily be mistaken since I've never been in this position. What I liked best was the way you described how our experiences change us, making us different. I also heve to compliment the way you described your characters feelings it really touched me.

You are a very talented writer. However, this is a personal preference, I do not like stories where siblings have the same lover. It is just to Yucky for me. I am sure that you will be published some day since you are very talented. Good luck!

I liked this. I hated Sally tho. She annoyed me lol. I am putting this on my faves and authers lol. Well Luke should of stayed. That made me mad. I was sad that he left her. They loved each other. and yea. Well good fic and yea!

~*Shannon*~

i loved the story. not every one can, but it was like you put the readers into the story [sorry if you can't understand what i mean:)]

awesomw

THIS IS SERIOUSLI A REAL COOL FIC! i mean i realli like the setting u've dun it in. we just did some wrk on the vietnam war a lil while ago in scool. at 1st i thought u were goin on bout the war in iraq till u mentioned Vietnam. anywayz i realli like it and u've ended it very niceli!

Beautiful, you should give this to a publisher

It's really really good that you've managed to convey Sally in a less 'hell-hath-no-fury' light. It makes her a much more deep character.
I LOVE LUKE! Can't wait to get to see him and Amy back together!
Lotsa love
Scarlett

Ah, wow! What a good story! I found it while browsing through someone's favorites list, and now I'll just have to add it to my own!

great story
love it

hehe.. i like this story. a LOT! keep writing...
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-

i love your story.. its very real.. love it. (jeez. this review makes me sound stupid or something. too tired..) anyway. it was great reading it.

luvly

update soon