Reviews for Tears and Blood
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
I dont like the final two lines they dont flow well. The first part of it was really good though. I think the final two lines just needto be a bit stronger in emotion. Not that cutting isnt a strong emotion but you know what i mean. :P
AVIGON chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
It's simple enough in terms of wording and theme, but it didn't become too cliched because of it, and that's a good thing. Personally, I don't think the word "cutting" adds something to it (too explicite perhaps?), but that's your choice. Oh, by the way, you forgot to get rid of the "untitled".
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
Cool Cool, I like it!
The intellect chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
its good, but i think its a bit too simple for me. so much more can be fitted into a haiku!
i like the first three lines, but then it seems like you lost your track of thought
caz
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Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
aw it so sad