|Reviews for Discontented|
| IntricatePain chapter 2 . 1/3/2004
Oh man! (rubs hands together) This is gonna be so good, I can feel it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Mandier chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
This looks really good so far!
You have a good use of vocabulary, too! It's nice to have a good variety of words.
I don't really have anything bad to say, I just hope you update soon! Keep going, definately!
If you can, could you please r&r my new story, When Snow Falls in Vermont? Thanks!