|Reviews for Unknown|
| Saiai chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
Ouch. Now that's pain. I like it.
| xonlyxashesx47 chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
The style is diffrent, the poem is good, but I like your old style better. Its still good though :D
| mooKittyKat chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
its really very nice the rhyming isn't forced...its very flowing. I like it very much. Great Job!
| ScarletWishingstar chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
aw, how lovely. i always have a problem w/ that particular rhyme scheme, i either run out of words or insist on using unrhymable (word?) words _ but u did a wonderful job of it _