Reviews for Just Your Doll
karmakaze chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
OMG, that's exactly what dating is like. THANK YOU! Love it.
You are so good, and you're only 13? Wow.
pseudocidal chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
this is so good...i can relate to it so much. I like the doll idea you made it work really well. nice work!
fren chi chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
cool. and thanx for you're review. i have actually had a quick glance at some of your cousin/friends work and it was good.
Crazy Chick Mia chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
very nice! i love the first verse. just where the 'pace' of the poems drops out, and where I think a word might help...
Take me out when *YOU GET* bored
Aside from that I am ignored
Cradle me gently, whisper sweet lies
Promise you'll stay then say your goodbyes
i think this keeps up the beat...anyway, i like the idea of this one too, good idea played into words!
mooKittyKat chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
aww it makes me want to cry, but I can relate...its a really nice idea though.
Thanks for another good read.
Kar
AlexanderX chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
This poem was so sad.. Because its kinda true in my mind. It was a good one. I see nothing wrong in it (besides I almost cried!)
SweetWithUncertainty chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
great poem. i feel the power and feeling u put in to it. im sorry u had your heart broken.
SwimmerGirl
I'm swimming for love
It was not enough chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
Nice Analogy comparing yourself to a doll...speaking as a guy were dicks lol but sorry if someone put you in that position.
Please R&R some of my work