Reviews for Excuse me
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
Aww this is really sad. But its a really good poem. You shouldnt say its no good cus it is! :D
Mel Raye chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
mann ... know how you feel . happened to me before . they were just freakin' assholes X good poem ]
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
wow that's harsh! u gotta say this to him- but to his face. that's horrible. it's not really poetic- just ranting like u said, but it would make a good poem, u just need to add in more emotional words and imagery and stuff. Keep writing!
Ian chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
Well I will never ever do this to you. I love you and i will never leave you
ScarletWishingstar chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
rantings are always nice, i hate ppl like that...