Reviews for HoneyCoated Olives
Jacqueline Howcis chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
Really like you’re style, trying to explain intense emotion with such simple ideas, the olive coats in honey is just wonderful; finding new ways to explain common ideas is just tremendous! Keep it up *adds to favs* Also its nice to find another 21 year old on here!
Jac x
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nine iron chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
It is a great example of your original style, I can see a resembalance to Sweet. It is very good, I did enjoy the comparison. Top marks
Nine Iron
karla chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
Very nice, sounds so much like the poet. I loved the poem even though i hated it though. )
MistrissD chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
Im so jealous! This is so beautiful, your just full of talent. The title caught my eye, its so orignal, i love this so much
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
Very nice comparisons...lie vs truth...sweet vs bitter...LOVE IT!
Mia Haider chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
you have such an unique style though i just can't place it...
'nother fabu poem! i especially like the last line and the whole comparison to honey-coated olives.
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
EEP! OK, great metaphor, and some nice interior rhymes in some of the lines.
Also, intereting near rhymes at ends of lines.
But, it seems a little awkward. I tried reading it out loud, and it did have some nice momnets, but it didn't realy flow as well as yoyur other works.
I like the sentiment behind the poem, tho; neat idea.