|Reviews for Sophistry|
| jd chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
I was left breathless and awed reading this piece. This is...brilliant. The first line struck me hard, and immediately captured 100% of my attention, and the last line gave it an ending that left quite an impact on me. And the vivid imagery of it all is simply stunning. Great work.
| la nuit mes yeux t'eclairent chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
This is lovely. The imagery is so vivid, and the poem flows wonderfully. Great word choice. The only constructive criticism I might have is for this line:
And wayward shrubs
Howls of freedom, howls of space,
Depending on how you intended that line to be read with the rest of the poem, it should be 'howl'.
I especially love the last line. It rings so true, and not just for this instance.