Reviews for Sophistry
jd chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
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teh tarik chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
I was left breathless and awed reading this piece. This is...brilliant. The first line struck me hard, and immediately captured 100% of my attention, and the last line gave it an ending that left quite an impact on me. And the vivid imagery of it all is simply stunning. Great work.
la nuit mes yeux t'eclairent chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
This is lovely. The imagery is so vivid, and the poem flows wonderfully. Great word choice. The only constructive criticism I might have is for this line:
And wayward shrubs
Howls of freedom, howls of space,
Depending on how you intended that line to be read with the rest of the poem, it should be 'howl'.
I especially love the last line. It rings so true, and not just for this instance.
-not exactly