|Reviews for in the making|
| Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
i love the whole idea of the poem, and it does manage to flow. most of the wording seems right but you might want to read over it and change a few bits here and there.
| KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Good job. It proves alot of points and I find it pretty deep. Keep it up!