Reviews for Fresh
BoredomKills0620 chapter 6 . 7/26/2004
Cool.I like this story a lot.!I hope the story isn't on hold since you haven't updated in over 4 months cuz I'm very intrigued by your .!I find the way she reacted to her boyfriend & best friend.I tell you,if that were me I would have screamed,shouted,kicked,made them feel guilty,& anything else that invloves being miserable..THEN I would have went to my room & .*Shrugs*I guess to each girl her own,right?I hope I'll see another chappie soon.!Until then...
God Bless,
Chelsea aka Freshman(Sophomore as of August 9th.) .
ooies chapter 6 . 7/20/2004
Wow so is Julian gunna find her there and be all jealous? cuz i think she and Julian should get together but i know it's not my story D still he's hot (obviously) and their a good couple. Ashley is kinda way into himself if you know what I mean but other than that I really liked your story I know how you feel about ur ex cuz something simliar happened to me it really sucked! at any rate gr8 story keep updating!
Stevshals chapter 5 . 7/3/2004
Please i'm begging here. Please continue with this story. Hurry and update! Come on!
Stevshals chapter 6 . 5/20/2004
This is a very good story. I hope you hurry up and finish it. It is terrific. I couldn't stop reading it until it ended at chapter 6. Very Good Job
~ Stevshals
Jolly B chapter 6 . 5/11/2004
That was really cool. I don't know about the whole period thing, i mean i would've ran away and never come back if a hot guy saw blood on my pants.
It's all a little too sudden. I mean i can't read Julian at all, i don't know if he likes Maddie, concerned, or if he's a mixture between the both. I'm not being mean, just getting my confusion off my chest.
A question...how old are athe characters. I thought that by the way the first chapter sounded they were like...early 20's and in college. Then i thought they were like...17. Then theres the part when they thought that ws her first period, so i thought she was like...12!
But it's still a great story and i did enjoy it.
Update so i can read more.
brightness-of-bloosom chapter 6 . 3/14/2004
extremely funny chapter, i loved it so much! *hugs* sorry for not reviewing earlier _*. i am beginning to like Ashley, but i definitely like Julian more! ahahahaha. and the part with the period situation was amusing..so, please update as soon as possible! i thank you so much.
Faded Soulfire chapter 6 . 3/10/2004
Oh boy. So Tayna's sleeping over? I have a feeling this is gonna be hell for poor Madison. And haha, poor her... tripping over the rug in front of Ashley and all she can say is "evil rug" but its nice to hear that Julian thinks its funny lol.. Oh, the white towel scene... ya know, no matter how much I hear that from somewhere, it never gets old... like that's one of those scenes that you'd probably love to be in but would never really in real life.. well on most occasions you wouldn't. Anyway, I'm straying off topic (note: i do that a lot). Oh and Ashley, he kinda sounds really cocky with how he's like: "you can join me if you want." So, she doesn't hate him... but he's annoying... hmm, I kinda have a bad feeling about Ashley.. like he's nothing more than the typical player, who would ruin her life.. besides, I like Julian more. I don't know why.. I just adore him! heh.
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Ahh! Poor Mad. He hits her with the remote... its kinda humorous though.. her being uncoordinated and just being booped in the head... i'm playing it in slow motion in my head and I can't help but laugh. Is that mean of me? I hope not. And omg... of all the times to get a period... and Ashley notices it first. Poor girl! and "i'll go get u a thing for ur thing" I so can see a guy acting all embarrassed and saying something like that.. so kudos to you for making it realistic and funny at the same time! Haha, and he thought it was her FIRST one? Really, that poor, poor girl. I can't stop saying that.. I mean, that's gotta be one of the must humiliating things that's ever happened to her, so far, in this story. And he's throwing them in the vase? Man, Ashley sure is strange... what a guy.. and omg, hoo-hoo. Dude, you seriously HAD me cracking up at his statement!
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Tanya is wayy annoying and evil, lol. Wow, Madison really is quite a klutz... but it seems to be working to her advantage this time around, heh. And aww! That was such a quite scene there... I bet Julian will find them sleepign together the next morning and be ubber jealous that they're sleeping together and get bad ideas. OK, so I won't bet.. cuz I don't do well with betting.. but I think something like that might happen... unless Tanya gets to them first *uh oh* that would really suck.
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So now, you've experienced one of my reviews. And no, I don't think the plot is cliche, just don't have Ashley and Madison all over each other and like making out and going out like over the next two chapters or something... that would be predictable and cliche.. But this isn't cliche thus far. I'm glad your excited about long reviews.. Some ppl don't like them.. I think they're crazy though. Well, please do update soon. I need a good laugh and something good to read.
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Faded Soulfire
inconsequential me chapter 6 . 3/4/2004
Kudos? Er...It means..."Hats off", I think. More like... Impressive, excellent, etc...Kudos.
Bahaha, So funny. First her falling on her face...bahaha. Clever. Indeed.
And THEN. BAM! bahaha...the period...I laughed so hard! So witty. Bahaha, yeah, I'm still not over it. Heh. Jeeze.
Anyway... Excellent chapter...I enjoyed it. Very amusing :) EEsh, both of our madison's are similar in their seemingly clumsy lifestyles, eh? heh.
Kudos.
Madkoko chapter 6 . 3/4/2004
Hey.. i really like your story! And ashley and mad sounds soo cute together.. anyway.. post the next chapter soon coz im waiting.. :)
Liat86 chapter 6 . 3/4/2004
Great story. Really funny too!
Update soon
kristina toffland chapter 6 . 3/3/2004
totally awesome job! you are doing such a great job! since, you say you're goign to read i'm expecting a review from you, tee hee! keep u the aesome job, okay! and keep up the good work!
Kris
Eleni chapter 5 . 3/3/2004
ah! your back! *dances* great chapter. ashley sounds like the kind of guy who i would eat alive. mwahahahahaha... _ update soon(er than last time)!
KristiexxNguyen chapter 6 . 3/3/2004
can't stay on long so i'll make this short. GREAT CHAPTER! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE! i hope she hooks up w/ julian tho!
Midnight Owl chapter 6 . 3/3/2004
are you kidding me? about the tampon thing, i mean... wow. guys really are immature. one of my best guy friends is kind of like ashley though. he's such a dork. lol. one time he was over at my house and i went to get something and i came back and he was holding a pair of my under-wear and i'm like... what are you doing? apparently, he got bored and started looking through my drawers. but omg, that's so embarrassing about the period thing. anyways, between ashley and julian i'm kind of having a tough time... this chapter didn't have much julian so i'm sort of swinging towards ashley (who reminds me a bit of Tristan off Gilmore Girls, which i used to watch before it got way too... blah).. but i'm not sure. anyways, great chapter update soon
soccerlovergirl149 chapter 6 . 3/3/2004
hehe, im sorry! but if u go to and check out mentosadidasgirl17 (that's me!) u will kinda understand lols! but this was GREAT! grf i kno how Madison feels! but hm, i don't know who I want her to end up with but um that's up to you! ok, so don't worry i will work on unexpected
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