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   Angelic Eden chapter 6 . 3/3/2004 I'm loving this fic, but please don't tell me that she's gonna hook up with Ashley! Julian is way better! |
| audrey-wannabe chapter 6 . 3/2/2004 aaww . . omg! i didnt even notice my own private message! kewl! thats TWO messages ... woot woot my constant reviewing pays off . . *does review dance* lol ashleys so hot now ... im such a hypocrite dude. one second im like OMG I HATE HIM then the next its all about the love...i sound so valley girlish . . oh dear ... great chap thanks for the post! |
| Faded Soulfire chapter 5 . 3/1/2004 This is so cool. I saw it on Walking Contradiction's fav page and knew it had to be amazing to be there and I was less than surprised to find out it was amazing! The plot isn't cliche, but yet again... break up's do happen all the time but I like the way you've dressed it up and made it more interesting for everyone. And the poor girl. I'd feel the same way about the whole hand kissing thing... because that isn't exactly my cup of tea if ya know what I mean. Oh and I love the name Julian. It's such an adorable name. And I don't like Tanya very much, but I guess that's to be expected. Anyway, pretty please update soon! I write long reviews... hehe. - Faded Soulfire |
| audrey-wannabe chapter 5 . 2/26/2004 ... *sigh* |
| audrey-wannabe chapter 4 . 2/26/2004 one of the best fics i've read on fictionpress! ive only read like 5 but thats not the point! lmao moi, j'adore! THE TWINS ARE SO CUTE! "we are FIVE years old." lmao |
| audrey-wannabe chapter 3 . 2/26/2004 teehee ... ashley's a BOY ... ok, i didn't review for the other chapters, but herre (whoa the double r was unintentional i swear) goes: i love it. i'm all for the angst and break-up situations with that one person helping another through it all. oh and the whole 16 candles and roses thing is kind of what filipinos do for girls' 18th birthdays. (Debuts) anyway, i thought that was interesting... yeah, ok ill read the rest...bye! keep up the great work! |
| KristiexxNguyen chapter 5 . 2/24/2004 YAY! U CONTINUED! GREAT CHAPTER! U GOTTA WRITE MORE! |
| CCS Fic Reader chapter 5 . 2/22/2004 UPDATE SOON! |
| Midnight Owl chapter 5 . 2/21/2004 that's okay... i rarely ever get long reviews. this was a good chapter but madison was kind of weird in it, you know? or it seemed that way to me. i like julian and i *do* like ashley. he seems nice. i think that julian seems like he'd be a good friend and ashley a good boyfriend, just because i couldn't imagine dating a friend that close as a boyfriend. good chapter! and update way soon please! |
| hummer chapter 5 . 2/21/2004 *sniff* I love Julian... Hehe.. XP |
| griifin924 chapter 5 . 2/21/2004 hey it wasnt boring i think it was good write more soon |
| Danielle G chapter 5 . 2/21/2004 This is a GREAT story so far! I can't wait until the next update...I really like Ashley..lol. Keep up the good work!:D |
| inconsequential me chapter 5 . 2/21/2004 Quite the serious chapter... The last bit was a nice twist, didn't really see it coming...that she kind of unconscoiusly hates dear-ol-Ash because he reminds her of Steve...That's kind of depressing. I feel bad for her. ANd ashley, too. Is he interested in her? I think so, or else he's just a very friendly type of person... Interested to see where it's going. Update soon, yes? I was excited to hear she'll be spending the night at Ashley's house! Bahaha! So clever. So much humor potential... Update, soon? please? Kudos on the chapter. |
| Angelic Eden chapter 5 . 2/21/2004 I really like this story and I like Julian too. I hope Madison opens her eyes to see what's right in front of her. Anyways, good job. I liked this chapter. I've g2g update my stories now. Update soon! |
| Thinkin0fyou chapter 5 . 2/21/2004 no, it doesn't suck. i think it was pretty good. i added it to my favorite stories. |