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  soccerlovergirl149 chapter 5 . 2/21/2004 waff! she updated! wo! lols, yea! so keep up the GREAT work! im waiting 4 d next chap... |
 Jenn-chan aka KristinaToffland chapter 5 . 2/21/2004 yo! this story is still so good so keep up the good work! and hope to get feed back from you soon! lol, Kris |
| Onion Ring chapter 5 . 2/20/2004 Nice chapter! I can see the love forming! Ah well continue. Can't wait for more. |
| brightness-of-bloosom chapter 5 . 2/20/2004 hi! this is a really well written story..authors tends to write better about their own experience and feelings, and i found that true due to your magnificent writing. this story is very, very good. i really like Julian, he's a very nice guy. on another note, i am terribly sorry with your ex-boyfriend and ex-friend. well, it sounds like you are healing though. best of luck to you and remember, life must go on. ) |
| soccerlovergirl149 chapter 4 . 2/20/2004 aw! im so sorry! but maybe continuing to write will help you heal a lil bit? im SO sorry! but keep up d good work! |
| Graaciie chapter 4 . 2/19/2004 hey this is really good..and im sorry about your ex bf and best friend..but its good that you're using writing to express your feelings. I LOVE your story..plase continue! |
| inconsequential me chapter 4 . 2/15/2004 BAHAHA! So clever, so witty, so...honestly funny...I'm afraid i love your piece of fiction... so entertaining, it kind of hurts... well, hurts that there isn't mroe to read...isound obsessive... the beginning chapters were absolutely amazing...you portrayed her emotions so well, seriously... the way you worded her feelings was intense... and i loved how it eased into comedy... So funny! bahaha... i would've assumed him a girl, as well. and then this chapter! thinking he was julian...bahaha...poor girl. sounds like something i would do. love how it keeps the light humor but seriousness all the same... yeah, ok, rambling. sorry. kudos, excellent story :) will you be updating soon? please? |
| hummer chapter 4 . 2/15/2004 HHahahahahahahhahahahahahaha...! Oh my friggin god... cant breathe... hohooh... XD GREAT STORY! Ok.. Im really really really hyper cus I drank too much coffee with too much suga in them... XP Anyway! I love your story! its awsome... muahahahahaha... i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY hope you update soon! ~mua~ |
| Angelic Eden chapter 4 . 2/2/2004 Damn, I really like this story. I'm sorry that this really hppened to you, that sucks. I don't know what I'd do if i saw my best friend and boyfriend together, probably have a mental break down and transfer schools, I dunno. anyway, this story is really good and I hope you update soon. |
| griffin924 chapter 4 . 2/2/2004 great story it was funny wen da little girls were fighting update soon |
| Night Lily chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 LOL. That's so embarressing. Update soon:) |
| KristiexxNguyen chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 hey great chapter! i hope you'll continue the story lata! and i hope u'll be able to move on! |
| Haute Couture chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 I'm sorry about your boyfriend and friend. That's too bad, and I hope you'll be okay. . Don't worry about continuing this story right away (just as long as you do so sometime in the future!). . Good luck. |
| kristina toffland chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 that's such a shame but I know how it goes! hope you will contiue this some time in the future because this is so good! good luck to ya, oh and please review my fics, too, Kris |
| Midnight Owl chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 -great- story! your writing style is fabulous! i can't wait to see where you're going with this plot and these super characters (julian is -so- cool). steven sounds like an asshole and i think that i'd hate emily because that's definately the worst thing you can do to a friend. or one of the worst things. anyways, i loved how ashley was a -guy-. and can i guess that the two guys fighting over her will be julian and ashley? or... will it be steven and julian? oh well, i'm sure i'll find out soon. update again soon please! |