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   Ave Nosredna chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 Cool, so she finally meets Mr. (male) Ashley! I see something coming between them! *wink wink* lol ~Ave |
| Signora di Aria chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 This story is awesome. It shows the realness of lost love but that there is more to be found. I can't wait for you to continue this story. I really wanna know what happens! |
| kaika switched chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 This really happened to you (the kissing thingie, anyway)? That sucks. But, enough about that, great chapter. I'm exctied to read the next chapter, so update soon! |
| kaika switched chapter 3 . 1/31/2004 Heh, that sucks. Nice little twist with the gender swapping thingie. Anyway, off to the next chapter. |
| kaika switched chapter 2 . 1/31/2004 Oh, a date. That's exciting. _ I already like this Julian character a lot, porbably because of the name (great name). Anyway, onto the next chapter! |
| amanda chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 really good chapter, so whens the new one coming? Amanda |
| Eleni chapter 4 . 1/31/2004 hey great story. i love the julian/ashley mix up. :) tre humor. keep writing! |
| Shuffle Queen chapter 3 . 1/13/2004 Another really cute story. Update this one too, it's awesome! Later. ~Shuffle Queen~ |
| gclover chapter 3 . 1/11/2004 yes yes i do like! please update soon, this is great. |
| sfun chapter 3 . 1/10/2004 Pretty good so far...and funny... update soon... |
| Haute Couture chapter 2 . 1/10/2004 I am a ditz...sorry, I thought there was another chapter after 3. Soo...I'll review on chapter 2 instead. . The overall story was fantastic. I love your description. I thought she overreacted to finding out that Ashley was a guy, though. . Anyways, update soon. x3 |
| Haute Couture chapter 3 . 1/10/2004 Love the story. I'm going on to the next chapter, but I have to say, a Louis Vuitton purse AND a watch for a girl she's never even met? My god, the girl must be loaded...that's so crazy! . lol ok, I'm going to read the next chapter. |
| Niccy chapter 3 . 1/10/2004 Hey, I like your style of writing. It's fun and light.. good story so far, keep going with it. :) I love the name Julian, I was going to use that name in my next story. lol. Keep up the great work~ |
| Eleni chapter 3 . 1/9/2004 haha... wow... giving some guy a handbag is something id do accidentally... :) heehee. i like this story. keep writing! |
| Onion Ring chapter 3 . 1/9/2004 Good story so far. Your descriptions are now and simplistic so it's very easy to read and the dialogue makes sense. I feel bad for her with her two best friends kissing but i bet she is going to hook up with one of their best friends now just to piss them off? Well you have a lot of choices of where this can go and i hope its FRESH and original. well nice fiction and i hope you continue. By the way, can you check out my stuff when you can? Thanks! |