Reviews for Some Inspirational Stories
wishingdreamingwaiting chapter 2 . 5/28/2005
Your work is so amusing! And it makes me feel like such a jackass, I love it! (Honestly though, you are awesome at writing with satire and sarcasm.) Great work!
Tessabe chapter 3 . 2/9/2005
The first two were clever and funny, the last well, I'm not sure what to say.
Ethereal Silver chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Love the stories! And the second one just cracked me up! Great!~
Stories-have-souls chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
The end was so funny! I love the story!
William Winters chapter 3 . 5/20/2004
Stunned silence here...
The first two stories were extremely clever, especially the second one. You may not fight a traditional flame-war, but you do like to thrash out at the less mature writers on Fictionpress (I hope I don't count as one of THOSE...). I just can't get enough of your humor.
The third's almost cruel. The moral does go against my beleifs a bit, but...I suppose it makes me a sick person, but I had to laugh at all of it after the Canadian penny joke.
Keep writing!
Biola Gal chapter 2 . 4/3/2004
I just wanted to say that I found your stories amusing, in addition to being well written. The tone of detached irony is quite effective, especially in the morals. I have to admit, though, that I didn't enjoy the third story as much as the first two. I think its because you tried to parody a generalization, rather than a specific story. Also, the first two have a familar sort of feel, quite in keeping with reality, which I don't see as much in the third. I'm sorry I can't be more specific about why it doesn't work as well. All in all, though, very nice.
Vestigial Account chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
So mean. So cynical. So jaded. So funny!
Dylan Wiles chapter 2 . 1/5/2004
Are we really that bad? :) Well what the hey , we're writers not rocket scientists!'Nuther good-un.
Dylan Wiles chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
A parable for the twenty-first century. Beautiful! Love it
DYLAN WILES chapter 3 . 1/5/2004
This thing just kills are two more of these that just popped up today that Ill be going to next , but what I really wanted to say was how much I enjoyed your review of my story 'Kid'. Its the first honest review I've gotten and if your homepage address was working I would write you and thank you at length.
Thank you
Medron Pryde chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
this is hilarious. I LOVE IT!