| Reviews for Slipping |
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  i'm a sucker for love stories chapter 1 . 10/27/2004 Hey! This is really good! Short story? Gotta say if he ever wakes up! Write more if poss! |
| i'm a sucker for love stories chapter 1 . 10/27/2004 Hey! This is really good! Short story? Gotta say if he ever wakes up! Write more if poss! |
 verus pax chapter 1 . 6/15/2004 Wow! Really good! For your age aswell! Well i don't know CheiThai's but still exellent stuff! Cool plot and storyline, I like the way Bec still prays and how she and her mum misunderstood each other. Gosh Brent is sweet, there should guys like that around! lol Anway I hope you keep going, writing a sequel together, it's really good! |
| kelseypaige chapter 1 . 2/20/2004 Wow, this is powerful, and sweet too. Are you going to continue this? Cause is works well as a one-shot, but developing the plot deeper with more chapters wouldn't hurt. It's just so cute, i want to grab Brent and hug him. He sounds VERY sexy. _ Rebecca sounds like a cute girl too. Write more if you can! I'll be checking round. ~fluffy-chan |
| magicaldragon14 chapter 1 . 1/11/2004 hey this story is dreat keep it up, I want to know what happens next if you intend to continue |
| NeverEndingQuest chapter 1 . 1/6/2004 Very well written. Contiune! |
| conditionoakland chapter 1 . 1/5/2004 wow...deep...great story!...Rebecca is so similar to someone I know |