|Reviews for On the Block|
| Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
I think this poem encapsulates what I sometimes feel like as a writer.
I can't think of any bad things to say.
I think by putting the words on separate lines makes the poem seem in slow motion and also seems like typing.
| Genine chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
I like this, how the sentences make sense if you take them one at a time. I also like how you ended it: exactly what I feel. Nice stuff.
| Sammy- B chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
thtas good, i like the ending
| JohnBarley chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
Right on Sister!
| Kelsey Windsor chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
ahhaz.. had a big smile on my face with this one )
| Medron Pryde chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
LOL Ok, that one is just plain funny. I love it!