| Reviews for On the Block |
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   Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis chapter 1 . 1/20/2005 I think this poem encapsulates what I sometimes feel like as a writer. I can't think of any bad things to say. I think by putting the words on separate lines makes the poem seem in slow motion and also seems like typing. |
| Genine chapter 1 . 12/31/2004 I like this, how the sentences make sense if you take them one at a time. I also like how you ended it: exactly what I feel. Nice stuff. Genine** |
| Sammy- B chapter 1 . 12/12/2004 thtas good, i like the ending |
| JohnBarley chapter 1 . 5/20/2004 Right on Sister! |
| Kelsey Windsor chapter 1 . 1/12/2004 ahhaz.. had a big smile on my face with this one ) |
| Medron Pryde chapter 1 . 1/6/2004 LOL Ok, that one is just plain funny. I love it! |