Reviews for The Elements of My Life Meleena's Song
BranwenEithne chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
its so sad, the loss of emotion and self...ive had times where i felt the emotion has gone from me but its always returned. To have it gone forever would be devastating. It was also wonderfully written and flowed nicely.
Blessed be!
deathdealer chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Excellent! This piece really took my breath away, I can't get over the passion in your words. You clearly have a lot of talent...
I also liked how you started and ended with the same line, it really put your point into detail. Nicely written. Keep up the good work. :)
chainedfreedom chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
really well put.
it would be a beautiful song.