|Reviews for The Elements of My Life Meleena's Song|
| BranwenEithne chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
its so sad, the loss of emotion and self...ive had times where i felt the emotion has gone from me but its always returned. To have it gone forever would be devastating. It was also wonderfully written and flowed nicely.
| deathdealer chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Excellent! This piece really took my breath away, I can't get over the passion in your words. You clearly have a lot of talent...
I also liked how you started and ended with the same line, it really put your point into detail. Nicely written. Keep up the good work. :)
| chainedfreedom chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
really well put.
it would be a beautiful song.