Reviews for Hi Jimmy darling
Just me.Jessie B chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
This is, If I may say, Unusual. I liked it though so keep up the good work.
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
I love how you say "good bye" in other languages while still managing to keep the point clear. Don't stop writing and remember that I'm here so you at least have one fan!
~*K $ey*~
deathdealer chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Interesting concept. I like you explored the regions of what a bully feels like of like that ripple that pain has on people.
You expressed yourself well in this piece. Great work
ebonyheart chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
very moving. a lot of people never see that bullying might be a way to cry for help. good stuff.
AVIGON chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
Interesting take on it. I especially enjoyed the repetition and how you related the two points of view. Five times hi, and four times goodbye...