Reviews for Perfect
Literary-lycos chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
WOW... intense I absolutley liked this one. I'm trying to find a word that describes it but i just can't, you have a talentin writing. at first glance people would think it simple but theres a greater psychology to your poems which is really cool.
Schubiegirl chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
This is sad. I've been reading some of your poems, and ironically enough everyonei look at is about heartbreak. you have a good insight into bad relationships, and i hope it's not from personal experience. This kind of reminds me of The Beautiful Face, a poem of mine, though i don't know why. Good job though, and thanks for reviewing my work.
Radical Chic chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
That is so sad. Very beautiful though. The story told here is very somber, but your wording is perfect.
Mirrorwind chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
OOh, another good one. This is so intense and you express yourself so well...this is really good! I like the ending, it feels so hopeless (I don't like being hopeless, I like the way you expressed it...you get it, I think...)
Wingless Fairy chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
You say you want critisism, but this does not need it. Another great poem. Congrats
Crystal Snowflakes chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
I can't say much for this...beautifully written... also inspiring. Great job!
WannaBePoet chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
I really like this, I'm not sure there's anything to really criticize about it, it had a good flow, nice job.
LaurasPoetryCorner chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
I have no critism for this piece, but I haven't much to comment either. It's one of those pieces you understand inwardly but can't comment outwarld per se about, for it's more feeling what is written than anything else.
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
I LOVE IT.. SO SAD..I LIKE THE WHOLE IDEA BEHIND IT - I LIKE HOW YOU DESCRIBE IT. VERY WELL WRITTEN.