Reviews for Lost
Shadowz the Silver Wolf chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
I think that the last line is fine. it goes with the format of the poem. I like how it rhyms btw _ I like it_ it's a good poem
flowerthief chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
I like the ending. I had to read it twice to understand it. I like it. DO you pay for your account?
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
Okay i like the ending, the act you've used normal, because most people would have just put 'great for me' or 'good for me' but you dont want that much you onlt want things to be normal.
I dunno if i've explained myself craply there. anyway, i hope you know what i mean.
I think the second para just needs a few more syllables in it tbh.
(Sorry i aint bin reviewing you for a bit)
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
I like the ending. Change isn't exactly a good thing. Used to the normal stuff.
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
I like that it is cool!
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
Sometimes different is good. Hmm... you're right the ending is kinda off... normal isn't strong enough of a word... I"m not sure what u could change it to...
Psycho Teddy chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
Again, a poem that almost everyone can relate to in some way or another. I like the ending, but I'm not sure about the second paragraph (is that what you would call it?). Otherwise, nice work.
Ian chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
not your bs, but deffinitly not your worst. I think the ending is ok though