|Reviews for Love Enjoy|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
¿What name had she that was my love?
I can't perceive;
¿What dream shared we so long ago?
I can't believe;
¿Where is that hot pleasure of kiss?
I can't conceive;
¿How faded both our lust so fierce?
I can't deceive;
¿Why are gone now all those sweet words?
I can't receive;
For time and chance havoc have wreaked,
Since old illusions never peaked;
And, destiny is just small steps we take,—
Forgotten when we decide to love fake.
| William Ironclad chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
Awesome! Somethings can be hidden while others can't. Very cool.
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| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
I like this one too. Good job!
| Sarah-Angel87 chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
actually it does make sence, and i really like it. I guess it can b take different ways but i like it. its about how love finds u even if u dont want it too. i can relate to this poem, you did and exclent job. the "Un" at the start of each stanza has a really good powerful effect, keep up the great work.
| Deana Bell chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
I like this a lot. I think it makes sense, but than I guess the reader always tries to take the poem and apply it to their life, and that's what I did. Great job.
| Psycho Teddy chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
I never realised how many different sub-headings love could be split in to. You have pretty much put into words what all of us think and feel every day. Well done.
| TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJar chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
...all kinds of love, but never a good ending...good poem...
| Ian chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
...it sounds like you dont like love...and what did you mean by unlastable? : (