Reviews for Where to Go
J-fReAK chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
This is really good! I really like the style that you chose, it kinda "flows." Also, it's a good topic to write about, that is, not seeing the path when it's right under your nose. This is great, keep it up!
Bimmer chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
*clings t' 'er buddy* You've finally seen the light! *pats and gives another cookie for joining*
As for the poem...I like it Good word choice, interesting theme...the only thing, if at all, that I'd improve would be the rhyming scheme...you went in and out of it.