Reviews for Dreamers
Megan chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
.. that's really creapy amy... good job
Ray chapter 5 . 1/17/2004
It's good so far...very descriptive, keep it up...
EyesLikeAshes chapter 3 . 1/8/2004
Just wanted to say I love the story so far. The prologue was fantastically written and the atmosphere was there for the other two chapters. I love the character names, I don't know why but they just stuck out for me.
My only real suggestion would be to use scene breaks when you change scenes. Like a couple of dashes or something, just so we know we've changed locations. Oh yeah, and I laughed my ass off at the Buffy reference :) A character in a coupleof my stories is a Buffy freak too (mostly because I am) so it was funny to see that worked in there. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and finding out what's up with Dawn. I'm out.