Reviews for False Light
happy-go-lucky chapter 3 . 6/20/2004
"I am nothing to you
You make me nothing
I am nothing"
the best lines out of all the poems..really good work!
HappY was here...
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
Nice. Very powerful. Very storng. Excellent imagery. I love it.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
aiur chapter 3 . 3/6/2004
aww ... darn i hate it when you hit the truth just like that ... this poem is just a cycle, isn't it? . cycles hurt. very badly. especially the ones that keep going ... what goe sup has to fall ... why couldn't that have been written the other way around? well ... i guess i know why actually ... 'cause that wouldn't have been true.
the truth sucks ...
~k8
kim chapter 2 . 1/23/2004
OMG STOP IT. THIS IS NOT DOING ANYTHING FOR YOU. HE'S HURT YOU ENOUGH AND HE'S GONNA DO IT AGAIN NESSA. YOU KNOW THAT YOU CAN BE GULLIBLE-AND THIS IS JUST PROOF OF IT. STOP IT NOW. I'M NOT STANDING FOR THIS.
Sunami Silverblade chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
_ I love dark writing, so I liked this poem very much. Good job; I did not find any grammatical errors whatsoever. (Yay for Evanescence and ROCK MUSIC, by the way! '' I read your bio, and I just had to totally agree with you. Music/writing/drawing are all part of me. I'm very much obsessed with them all...) Bah! Must...stop...blabbering... '' Anyway, I really did like your poetry, and maybe I'll check out some more of your writing. Good job!