Reviews for Belligerent Release: Prayer to Ascension
Pont chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Very... religious sounding... did you write this after a service? _
sorry if I'm being naiive about this one, since I'm not religious in any way shape or form, but hang with me please. I get this one, I understand the 'calling' part, and the part where you call for something from the forces above, and I get the basic idea of what that something is. Overall, GREAT IMPROVEMENT _ I actually kinda sorta maybe get this one!
yes, this one is MUCH more understandable, the point and idea is much more clear-cut. Congratulations!
ja ne
pont (who talks to much and is sorry if she's annoying you or (as she probably is) is wasting your time)
PainKiller chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
You have the freaking coolest vocabulary ever (minus Cradle of Filth; don't ask me how they come up with stuff like "A Crescendo of Passion Bleeding"). You have a penchant for long-ish titles like that. As always, very poetic and very moody... I can see this being written by Poe. Great work!