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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I've never read a poem like this. I especially liked the title, was that your assigned number at the hospital, or something akin to that? It made more sense than you gave yourself credit for. I liked the flow, and the use of quotation marks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it! only thing i would change is to make it longeer and a little bit more dramatic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds like something someone would say in a movie! I find it very good seeing how this time I know it is based on reality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :shudders: Haunting. The arrangement of phrases has a great impact, all for the good. Nice job. |