Wow, I've never read a poem like this. I especially liked the title, was that your assigned number at the hospital, or something akin to that? It made more sense than you gave yourself credit for. I liked the flow, and the use of quotation marks.

i like it! only thing i would change is to make it longeer and a little bit more dramatic.

This sounds like something someone would say in a movie! I find it very good seeing how this time I know it is based on reality.

:shudders: Haunting. The arrangement of phrases has a great impact, all for the good. Nice job.