One of my most favorites. Very short and simple, yet good at the same time.
Valerie

Wow... They just keep getting better and better! They're all beautiful so it is very hard to pick a favorite, but I must say that "Ashes" was the best. ) I really liked it. They're all wonderful though. Write on!

Wow... I liked this one too, even a little better than Flames. WHere do you come up with this stuff? I really liked it. Onto ashes!

I liked this one, but I have yet to read the next two so I don't have a favorite yet... But great job. I like it.

I have to go with "Fire." The tempo (rhythm) was very smooth and catchy. "It burns only to die" was my favorite line from all the rest. I like "Ashes," too - it sounded Shakespearian. Let's just say it was a difficult choice for me.

Awesome...simply beautiful..I love how you seperated them into three chapters...like stages...Really nice job!

short poem, short review:
tres belle

I can't pick just one that I like the most! They are all amazing. I suppose if I were to pick one, it would be Ashes. Gotta love the death imagery.

Short, but with a really deep meaning!

GOsh, I have to pick ONE favorite? OK, here is the order:
1, 3, 2
"Fire" has the best flow, & it is a perfect set up to the other three.
Making something new out of a cliche is not easy! That is why I think "Ashes" is great because it is so provacative.
As for "Flames", it is very sensual & hot (harde har har). No, I liek the set, they work well together!

"Ashes" is definitely the best.
"Flames" suffers from a jarring change in metre between the second and third lines. "Fire" has a lesser manifestation of the same problem in line three - I'd expect it to go "Its passion is [something]" rather than "Its passion is [something something]" (also, pedant point It's is only apostrophe'd if you're saying "it is". Its an exception to the normal rules)
"Ashes" On the other hand, I really rather like. You do seem to go for the love/death imagery a lot, and I'm a bit of a sucker for that.