Reviews for Fire, Flames and Ashes
Post Apocalyptic chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
One of my most favorites. Very short and simple, yet good at the same time.
Sterces chapter 3 . 4/20/2004
Wow... They just keep getting better and better! They're all beautiful so it is very hard to pick a favorite, but I must say that "Ashes" was the best. ) I really liked it. They're all wonderful though. Write on!
Sterces chapter 2 . 4/20/2004
Wow... I liked this one too, even a little better than Flames. WHere do you come up with this stuff? I really liked it. Onto ashes!
Sterces chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
I liked this one, but I have yet to read the next two so I don't have a favorite yet... But great job. I like it.
tofujunky chapter 3 . 4/17/2004
I have to go with "Fire." The tempo (rhythm) was very smooth and catchy. "It burns only to die" was my favorite line from all the rest. I like "Ashes," too - it sounded Shakespearian. Let's just say it was a difficult choice for me.
Samekian chapter 3 . 2/26/2004
Awesome...simply beautiful..I love how you seperated them into three stages...Really nice job!
axica chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
short poem, short review:
tres belle
persephone wretched chapter 3 . 1/26/2004
I can't pick just one that I like the most! They are all amazing. I suppose if I were to pick one, it would be Ashes. Gotta love the death imagery.
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
Short, but with a really deep meaning!
Seeker of the Way chapter 3 . 1/8/2004
GOsh, I have to pick ONE favorite? OK, here is the order:
1, 3, 2
"Fire" has the best flow, & it is a perfect set up to the other three.
Making something new out of a cliche is not easy! That is why I think "Ashes" is great because it is so provacative.
As for "Flames", it is very sensual & hot (harde har har). No, I liek the set, they work well together!
Morcar chapter 3 . 1/8/2004
"Ashes" is definitely the best.
"Flames" suffers from a jarring change in metre between the second and third lines. "Fire" has a lesser manifestation of the same problem in line three - I'd expect it to go "Its passion is [something]" rather than "Its passion is [something something]" (also, pedant point It's is only apostrophe'd if you're saying "it is". Its an exception to the normal rules)
"Ashes" On the other hand, I really rather like. You do seem to go for the love/death imagery a lot, and I'm a bit of a sucker for that.