Reviews for Jade Eyes
FearOfClowns chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
I really liked it alot. V. nice piece of writing. the only thing i would change is that the word eyes is kind of overused in this poem. great job
blessed be,
liz
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
i liek it.. great description & personification... why isn't the first line italicized?