Reviews for Up in Smoke
nesy chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
This one doesn't have much to do with your penname, does it? Really good. It's rushing.
axica chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
the last line is especially touching
AngelLLY1 chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
I really like this poem! I love the line "choking on my fears"
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
great imagery! awesome poem!
BecomingMyself chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
Someone must have been backstabbing you big time, to write about lost faith, solitude and now about going up in smoke...
Very dark and pessimistic view on life and love, conveyed well in your work.
Write on!
Thank you for your review to SofS, it is greatly appreciated.
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
Good poem, I can definitely relate to the feeling. This was well-written, and I especially liked the ending. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
aode chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
Nice poem. Great imagery and use of words... Good work, and keep writing.
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
great use of metaphor! The effects of smoke like from a barbeque, where it seems no matter where you move, the wind will blow the smoke inot your face, but also right when yuou are least expecting. This is a wonderfully clever parallel to a past love that was not what you wanted, either unrequited or broken apart.
Nice work!
echoes of chaos chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
excellent. the serving of attitude in the last couple lines really finished that off perfectly