Reviews for Borrowed Time
ughthisisawful chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
The broken lines are a nice touch to a good poem.
EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 1/9/2004
Really nice girl...I like it very much!
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
So powerful and profound; every word seems to come alive. The ending had a huge impact on me. Impeccable work, as always. :)
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
Wow, very nice. Nice rhyming, even within the lines. Very deep. Sad, but I like the end.
good job!