I understand exsacally how you feel because i feel the same way right now i really like it alot keep writing!

*tear* Gosh, that was so sad. Your pain and longing seeps beautifully through each verse. I too am a victim of unrequite love, so I completely understand what you're going through. You're a very talented writer; don't ever stop expressing your feelings.
Would you consider reading "Intertwined"? I'd like to hear from you.