:)

very cute. enjoyed reading this story. :)

I love Quinn. The story was pretty good but near the ending it went downhill. I wish the sex didn't happen, it was... damaging.

omg...im completey utterly speachless! haha i could seiruly cry the ending is soo sweet i absoulty love your writing and the romantic scenes were brilliantly written :) i loved it! a beautiful plot and characters and i bet that you could easily write a book lol you are amazing :D hahaha

10/10!

Such a beautiful ending :-D

The Grammatical Errors were there... but... I can get over it... because it was a beautiful story :-D

and that last scene...

::looks at masturbated penis::

well I guess I can't say much but it was HOT. :-D

But personally in my experience it was better going slow instead of just thrusting in... my first time was a thrust in and I sort of like got raw and it hurt bad... but then we did again slower and i got used to it...

but I don't know :-D

I hope the brother dies in hell, fucking cunt.

i love the last sentence of this story, it's oddly serene and is like they both don't care about anything else but each other and it will always be that way. its good that you didn't load it up with drama in the final chapters, it is cute and it is sweet and it is better that way.

Nice. Long, i like the long stories. I think you wrote this story in a muture, but intimate way. It wasn't sleezy soundin either.

NS

I loved this story. It was so sweet...and so just awesome. There were a few spelling mistakes or typos but not many at all really...I think they were the general "typing too fast" things. And I loved that you made Quinn...I guess real crazy...I've known many cutters and I've had my own issues with self harm...and a lot of times these days people write stories where it's idolized or made to seem "cool" or "trendy" or whatever, or they write stories where the cutter/crazy person is just totally demented. And we're not all like that. I really liked that your story didn't do that.

Very enjoyable story. Perfect length and pacing. And the angst was just enough as well.

So far so good. I love the detail on the season - The imagery was a part of the story, instead something just stuck in there to make the story look good. Great start :)

Damn i love this story too, your stories rock. I love Quinn and Josh, they suit each other really well, and this story just seemed really original. Loved it.

YOU GO Q! YAY! I'M SO HAPPY...AND NOW MY MOM THINKS I'M AN ABSOLUTE FREAK...OKAY

You go Q! ~.~ believe in a thing called...love?

ah!...the pace is kiling me

I want that website! my poor gay men! gods, i hope quinn was awake through that...and i think that everyone who is causing them pain should jsut piss off!

eh...