Reviews for Across the Room
Crelian2202 chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
dont start lines with transitions the lines sound better with the transitions removed. Other than that nice, I hope you get a good grade for the ec.
Kalopsia chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
AH! Somehow I got excited reading this poem hahahaha. It was really good! I really enjoyed it.